Monday, May 14, 2012

antigone and hamlet

With power comes responsibility, and with responsibility comes decisions. Both kings in the stories of Hamlet and Antigone show how power can overpower you. King Polonius, in Hamlet, uses his power over his daughter Ophelia and pressures her into marrying Hamlet in order for him to gain more power. King Creon, in Antigone, uses his power to sentence Antigone, his son’s fiancĂ©, to death. In the end both Antigone and Ophelia commit suicide, and their suicides cause physical and emotional pain to the one’s they love. Both kings realize that they used their powers in a negative way and in the end lost more than they gained.

Friday, March 2, 2012

Genocide: how they occur, how to end them.

Chandler Mayberry
March 2, 2012
Mrs. Kennett
Period A

Why do genocides happen? What will it take to prevent genocides?

Throughout history there has been much genocide that has occurred. Usually genocide occurs because a group of people or a single person thinks that they are in power of another group of people. For example Hitler created genocide by blaming a certain group of people, the Jews, on the horrible economy that was progressing in Germany.
In order to prevent genocide from happening we need to first understand what it is. We should study and compare genocides in order to prevent similar ones from happening. If we study and understand past genocide and modern genocide we are able to understand what sparked those genocides to occur. Also, we can learn how to stop them before they escalate into something much bigger. We can’t just study genocides; we also must create a way to prevent it. In order to prevent genocides from happening we should come up with new laws or inform the public of genocide. If we educate the public more on genocide we may be able to stop the creation of them completely. Not only should we educate our country, but other countries as well, in order to stop genocide all around the world.

Sunday, December 4, 2011

My interview with Tucker Wheaton

1. How did you come up with the idea for your story?
- I came up with the idea for my story by combing my two favorite genres of fiction: mystery/thriller & science-fiction. I knew that only those two genres combined could give me what I wanted in my story. I love the appeal that science-fiction has on me. It’s like I’m exploring a new world every time I open a (science-fiction) book; every page I read I learn a little bit more about that world. As for the mystery/thriller influences in my story, well I think the best books are the ones that you can’t put down. For me, the books I can’t put down are the ones that combine mystery with thrilling action. Using these two genres I brainstormed an idea that I would want to read about.
2. Does your story relate to your life?
- In a small way, yes. The main theme of my story is being honest in life, and I try to live my life the same way, but other than that detail nothing else relates to my life.
3. What is the message of your story?
- The message that I want my book too send is that honesty in every situation always leads to a preferable outcome.
4. Who is your main character?
- My main character is an 18 year old young man named Shane Castor. He is the classic paragon model and remains true and honorable as he tries to uncover the mystery surrounding the plot of my novel.
5. How did you create your main character?
- Since the main theme of my book involves honesty I wanted the main character to be the epitome of honest morals. Sort of a combination between a knight, a Greek hero, and a good kid.
6. Where does your story take place?
- Since my story will have sci-fi elements to it I gave it a sci-fi setting. The setting will be several space stations all named after Greek Olympians that orbit the planet Mars in the year 2186. Most of the book will take place on the Athena station, which is basically the campus of the characters high school.
7. What are the ages of your characters?
- The main characters will all be young adults ages 17 and 18. There will be older characters, but their won’t be any hints as to their ages.
8. What is the genre of your story?
- Science-fiction/mystery/thriller/young-adult.
9. Is there dialogue in your story?
- Yes, I plan to alternate the openings of every chapter between dialogue and a description of the scene. The dialogue will open into descriptive writing and vice versa.
10. Is their conflict in your story?
- Yes, a shady government organization is exploiting the younger characters for unknown reason, and while Shane is attempting to uncover the meaning of this another group is trying to stop the govt. organization. It is sort of a triple sided conflict with two righteous groups and one evil group.
11. What is the climax?
- The climax will occur when Shane finally discovers the identity of the govt. organization and why they are doing what they are doing.
12. Did you use any outside references to write your story?
- I read the Maze Runner as part of my background reading, but mostly I drew upon sci-fi media I have encountered and mystery/thriller books that I have read.
13. Are any of your characters symbolic?
- Shane is symbolic of honesty prevailing over corruption. The govt. agency is symbolic of high-level corruption and the struggle to stop them symbolizes a good versus evil struggle.
14. Did you get any help from friends/family to write your story?
- No, so far it’s been all me, but I am hoping for some good peer review.
15. Did you have any inspirations?
- No, it’s been a very slow writing process.
16. When does your story take place?
- My story takes place in a future where mankind has united under a single government and has spread to all the planets and moons in our solar system. In the book the year will be 2186 and in addition to settlements on moons and planets there are also hundreds of space stations within the solar system.
17. What is the title of your book?
- Project Athena
18. What are the characters intentions?
- Shane wants only to save his fellow students from the sinister intentions of the shady govt. agency. The characters in the agency want only to further their secret agenda, and the scientists want to stop the work they have been doing from being used for evil intentions.
19. Do you have more than one main character?
- No, Shane will be the main focus if the story, but there will be other characters who get their own focus.
20. How do you think people will respond to your book?
- I think they the readers will find that it satisfies everything they want in a mystery wrapped in a thriller inside of a sci-fi novel.

Thursday, December 1, 2011

Dear Mommy

July 7, 1994
Age 7
Dear Mommy,
Daddy said you left the world today to live with the angels up in heaven. He said you won’t be here anymore so I can’t talk to you no more. Granma says I can write to you, but you can’t write back. Member wen you told me that wen you were a little girl you use to write in a diary? Well I found it today mommy wen I was helping daddy clean out your closet. I didn’t tell him I found it because I new he’d make me throw it away, he threw everything away…Granma said I should write to you whenever I feel sad, so I think ill write you every July 7th cause that’s the day you went to see the angels. I no you will be watching me with the angels, but ill still write you and tell you everything that happens! Does that sound like a good idea mommy? I think it is and so does grandma. Everyone keeps talking about cancer mommy. They keep saying that it was the cancer that took you away. Who is cancer mommy your friend? Is he with you and the angels? Do you like the angels mommy? Are they shinny and beautiful like you said? Do they have big soft wings mommy? I hope so. I can’t wait to see the angels mommy then I can be with you! Daddy wont stop crying mommy neither will Willy and Billy, but maybe that’s cause there babies. Every ones been crying mommy but not me! Cause I’m your strong girl! Member wen you said that! You said I’ll always be your strong girl! Don’t worry mommy ill take care of Willy and Billy but not that much cause there to little for me to hold them. Ill take care of daddy to mommy ill help him stop crying. I love you mommy ill see you and the angels soon I hope!
Love, Brooke

July 7th 1995
Age 8
Dear Mommy,
See mommy I told you I would write you on July 7th! I promised you I would! How are the angels mommy? Are they nice? Are you ever ganna come back mommy? I always ask daddy, but he just gets mad at me and he says no! shes never coming back! But I think you will mommy. Willy and Billy are 1 now! They look exactly alike but Willy has 1 dimple and Billy has 2! That’s how I can tell them apart. Ive been doing really good in school mommy! Art is my favorite class! I love to draw and my teacher says im very talented! I draw pictures for daddy all the time but he always loses them. Daddy works a lot. He works from early in the morning till really late! We always have a babysitter but shes really boring she doesn’t play with me. She likes Willy and Billy though cause there really cute. But I don’t need to play with her cause I have a new friend! His names Adian and he’s 9. And mommy guess what! We found out that my name means water and his name means fire! Isn’t that cool mommy! He’s my best friend. We do everything together. We like to play down at the pond on the hot days, Adian’s daddy built a tire swing for us! He’s really nice he owns Mayberry lumber yard. I miss you mommy. I think Willy and Billy do to. I no daddy does I can hear him talking to God at night praying to bring you back. I still haven’t cried yet mommy, but daddy still does. I can hear him crying at night. He sometimes calls out your name. Don’t worry mommy im still ganna take care of the twins and daddy. I love you mommy.
Love, Brooke

July 7th 1996
Age 9
Dear mommy,
I miss you mommy. Every day I miss you. School is getting really hard but art class is still my favorite. I like drawing the most. Sometimes I draw me, daddy, Willy, and Billy and you flying over us. I showed one of those pictures to daddy once but he ripped it up. Me and Adian found an old tree house in the woods behind his house. His daddy helped us rebuild it and it looks really nice mommy. Sometimes I go sleep there when daddy gets home cause sometimes he’s really mean. Willy and Billy are crawling now. They crawl everywhere. They still don’t talk yet but they both try to. I just don’t understand what they are saying. Granma visits us a lot. She tells me she misses you too. She usually comes at night and tucks us in cause I don’t like it when the babysitter tucks me in. Granma sings me to sleep every night but when I wake up in the morning shes not there. I wish we lived with Granma maybe daddy wouldn’t be so mean all the time. I found a small picture of you and put it in the locket you got me for my 5th birthday. I always wear it even when im sleeping. I miss you mommy and don’t worry mommy I haven’t cried yet. I love you mommy.
Love, Brooke

July 7th 1997
Age 10
Dear Mommy,
You no what I wish for when I blow out the candles on my birthday cake mommy? I wish for you. I no I told you that I was ganna still be your strong girl but I cant anymore mommy. I cry all the time. Daddy is always angry and Willy and Billy always cry. The only place I can go to be alone and write to you is in me and Adian’s tree house. We spend a lot of time there together. I like to go down to Adians daddys work sometimes. Its a lot of fun. We get to sit and watch all of the trees get cut down. The saw dust looks like snow only its brown, not white. In the winter I have school, so I don’t see Adian much cause his mommy home schools him. I wouldn’t want to be home schooled I like school mommy. All my teachers say that I am very smart, Granma says I get it from you. I don’t like to leave school. My babysitter is living at our house now. Her names Vicky, but me and Adian call her Icky Vicky. She sleeps in daddys room with him. I don’t like her. She smells like cigarettes and beer. She takes care of Willy and Billy though. She likes them, but not me I think its cause im a girl. I helped Willy and Billy learn how to walk mommy. They actually run more than they walk. Willy always falls though cause hes really clumsy. I don’t see Granma a lot anymore. Her and daddy got into a big fight one day I think it was about the babysitter. She calls me sometimes, but she doesn’t come to tuck me in anymore. I tuck myself in now and I hum her song. I liked it when you sang me to sleep. You sounded so beautiful. Granma coughes a lot when she sings it cause I think she always has a cold. I sang it to Willy and Billy once. They really liked it. I sang it to Adian once to but he said it was for babies so I don’t sing it to him anymore. I saw my first shooting star the other day. Adian said we had to make a wish and it would come true. I was ganna wish for you again mommy but instead I wished that me and Adian would be best friends forever. He told me he wished the same thing to I just hope it comes true. I love you and miss you mommy.
Love, Brooke


July 7th 1998
Age 11
Dear Mommy,
I hate it here mommy. I just wanna die and come live with you and the angels. And I could bring Willy and Billy to. Vicky hits me a lot. She says if I tell daddy she’ll hurt Willy and Billy to. I hate her. Daddy got hurt at work. He lost 3 fingers on his left hand on one of the machines. He stays at home now, but they still pay him. I thought it would be different having him stay home but its not. He sits in his chair all day and drinks beer and some rum. Him and Vicky smoke a lot of cigarettes to. Vicky works all day at the liquor store down the street so its just me the twins and daddy. Daddy made me get out of school cause he needs my help to watch Willy and Billy. There getting really big mommy. There talking a little bit to. They say my name and I taught them how to say yours. I sing to them every night mommy. Granma stopped calling. Daddy and Vicky said it was cause she doesn’t love me no more. I still get to see Adian though. He comes over in the afternoon to play and help me watch Willy and Billy. He told me I had to be his girlfriend. I thought I already was but he said that I had to hold his hand now too. Its kinds gross cause he always has sweaty hands. I like being with Adian. Hes really nice and I feel safe with him. I don’t like when Vicky comes home. She makes me eat dinner in my room and I have to stay there all night. She comes in around 6 and takes my plate. Sometimes she hits me if I don’t eat all my food. So I make sure I eat it all even though its always cold. I hide all my letters that I write to you under one of the floor boards under my bed. I think Vicky would through them away. I miss and love you mommy.
Love, Brooke

July 7th 1999
Age 12
Dear Mommy,
Did it hurt when you died? I asked Adian if it does and he said he didn’t no. I wonder If it does. Adian said that his daddy said that people that kill themselves go to Hell. I wanna go to Heaven with you. Vicky doesn’t hit me no more. Daddy does though. Only if I do something bad though. One time I dropped when of his beers and it got all over him. He got really mad and hit me in the face. He hit Billy once to cause he wouldn’t stop crying. Vicky found out about it but daddy just hit her to then hurt me again cause he thought I told her. I lock Willy and Billy in my room with me all day till Vicky gets home. The only times I leave the room is at 7:00 am to get daddy his breakfast. Then at 12:00 to get him his lunch. Sometimes he yells for me to get him more beers. I make Willy and Billys food early in the morning so all I have to do is heat it up real quick. Adians not aloud over anymore so I only see him when I sneak out to the tree house at night sometimes. Im always scared Daddy or Vicky will catch me. Adian kissed me one time on one of the bruises on my cheek it hurt really bad but it also felt nice. It reminded me of you cause you always use to kiss me on the cheek. I wish you were here mommy to make all of this go away. I love and miss you mommy.
Love, Brooke

July 7th 2000
Age 13
Dear Mommy,
My teacher once told me that your teenage years are suppose to be the best years of your life, boy was she wrong. Sometimes I think living in Hell wouldn’t be so bad. What could be worse than this? Adian told me that God and all of his angels are watching down on us. If God was watching down on me why hasn’t he stopped Daddy. Daddy does more than hit, smack, and punch me. I didn’t no what it was called till I read it in one of my books. I wanted to tell Adian or even Vicky, but I just couldn’t say the word. I constently cry mommy. And my body always hurts. He calls me by your name sometimes. I hate it. Ive thought about running away, but I cant. I cant leave Willy and Billy behind. I wish I could tell Adian, but I cant. Cause he would tell his dad and they might take me away. I cant leave the twins mommy. Theres nothing I can do.

July 7th 2001
Age 14
Dear Mommy,
I have a set schedule now. My entire day, no life schedule, I wake up at 5am. I am to clean the house and make breakfast for him and the twins. After breakfast he drinks and watches his game shows till around 10 then I am dragged out of my room and into his. At 12 I make the twins and his lunch. At 3 I am once again dragged by my hair into his room. Vicky gets home at 5 and starts dinner. I am aloud out of my room at 9 to take a bath, but the baths never wash away the filth I feel. After my bath I am locked in my room for the night. Of course I don’t sleep because I always think he will come in. When I wake up it is the same routine.

July 7th 2002
Age 15
Dear Mommy,
I’m still following my schedule. The only difference is I’m not dragged out of my room anymore I’m summoned. He knows I can’t fight him anymore, I’m too weak. He threatens to hurt the twins if I fight. Vicky knows about everything, but does she do anything about it, of course not. She beats me even more now because I am “stealing her spot.” Adian is the only thing on this planet that can take me away from reality. I go to see him every night at our tree house. I told him everything but sworn him to secrecy. I told him that I and the twins would be killed if anyone ever found out. He’s my only protection. The thing told me that if Adian ever came by the house again he would kill me, so of course Adian doesn’t come by anymore. I found out Granma died. I hope she’s in heaven with you. I hate her for not taking me away from this place.

Saturday, November 19, 2011

Another epic adventure

Alright this blog is for all you crazy Twilight fans. So on Thursday my mom, sister, cousin, and I attended the midnight premiere of Breaking Dawn part 1. Of course we all had our team Jacob and Team Edward shirts on, along with our twilight snuggies, fake vampire teeth, and of course our Twilight game board to play when we were waiting in line. We all packed into my mom’s light blue hybrid (most pathetic car ever!) and before we went to the movies we HAD to stop and get some food. Of course I wanted to go to McDonalds and get the 20 piece chicken nuggets, but no my sister wanted Taco Bell. I mean Taco Bells not bad, but come on were talking about McDonalds here. Anyway, we went to Taco Bell got the 12 Taco Box, a large order of nachos, cinnamon twists and a large soda (and no that wasn’t all for my sister, but I bet she could have eaten it all.) So after Taco Bell we had to make a Dunks run and get four large coffees. Now that we had our food and coffee we were off to the movies. We got the theater around 9:45 and there was no one there, so of course my mom starts doing her little victory dance while screaming, “We’re the first one’s here!” If you think that isn’t embarrassing enough, the women at the ticket booth is laughing hysterically and says, “We’re letting everyone in the theater early.” So we weren’t the first one’s there and yes my mother made a complete fool of herself. There were only about 20 people in our theater, so we were able to get good seats. We snuck our coffees and our taco box in, snuggled up into our snuggies and devoured the box of tacos in minutes. About around 11:00 we were all hungry again, so my mom went out into the lobby and purchased a large popcorn, a large soda, and of course candy! With all this food in our belly’s you’d think we would be tired, but no we were wide awake. Finally the movie came on (and no I will not tell you anything about the movie! If you want to know what happens get off your lazy butt and go see it!) But I will say the movie was AWESOME! Now it’s time to prep for part 2!

Thursday, November 10, 2011

The Bird Lady

Working in a store during the summer with no air conditioning is absolutely miserable. On top of that, having to deal with un-happy customers, constantly answering the phone, and trying to finish nonstop paper work is also miserable. Miserable is the perfect word to describe my job. The only thing that’s not miserable is punching out at the end of the day. Working over 50 hours a week is exhausting and if you ask me I’ll tell you straight forward how much I hate my job.
Once in a while I’ll get some of those “lonely” customers that just talk my ear off and I don’t really mind it, but my favorite customer is the bird lady. I could tell you everything you want to know about the bird lady except her name. Each morning she waits for the Gatra Bus outside of the nursing home down the street to drive her to my work. She always looks the same; solid color dress, dry gray hair pulled back in a tight bun, and a floppy hat covered in flowers. She walks with a small wooden cane and walks with a limp on her right leg.
Every morning the Gatra Bus arrives at 9:15, drops the bird lady off, and waits patiently outside for her. The reason why I call her the bird lady is because every morning she comes in and buy one birdhouse. “The birds are my friends”, she tells me, “They don’t talk back to me only sing.” The first time I ever met this woman she told me that it makes her happy to paint these birdhouses and make a home for the birds. After purchasing her birdhouse, with cash as always, the bird lady limps her way back on the bus and leaves, only to return again in the morning.
I only see the bird lady in the summer time. The winter is her time to hibernate, she once told me. Even though I dread going to work every morning, I still enjoy my short talks with the bird lady. Now it’s winter, and the store is calm. I sometimes think about the bird lady, wondering how she’s doing or what she’s thinking. In a way the bird lady has inspired me, inspired me to think outside the box. I now see the world a bit differently. I now take notice in the little things in life. And now, every time I see a bird I think of the bird lady. My only regret is never knowing her real name.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011

My Story vs. Forest Gump

I've made a lot of changes on my story from the last mentor text. After reading Ellen Foster I came up with new ideas about my story. I decided to re-name my story to "Dear Mommy" and write the book in diary entry form. Those changes were made based off of my first mentor text. For my second mentor text I chose to watch the movie Forest Gump.
The main character in my story, Brooke, has just lost her mother to cancer. She’s too young to understand what is going on and is confused about what has happened. Brooke’s mother dies on July 7th 1994 when Brooke is only 7 years old. Each year on July 7th Brooke writes to her mother starting each letter with Dear Mommy. As Brooke grows up she must battle many struggles, dealing with the loss of her mother, supporting her twin brothers while her dad slowly eases into a drinking depression, and trying to find herself. Each year on July 7th, the anniversary of her mother’s death, Brooke writes her mother, explaining what has happened throughout the years. As she ages Brooke falls in love with a man named Adian. She meets him at a very young age and they both become the best of friends. Later on in her early adult hood years Brooke and Adian marry and decide to get full custody of her twin brothers in order to get them away from their bum, abusive father.
In the movie Forest Gump, Forest is a slow thinking man dealing with similar struggles as Brooke. For one thing, Forest also must deal with the death of his mother. After Forest’s mother dies Forest see’s the world differently. As a young boy Forest befriends a girl named Jenny and later on in the movie Forest and Jenny fall in love and get married, just like Brooke and Adian. Jenny is an outgoing girl with dreams far beyond her reach. Jenny lives with her abusive father and is always struggling to find herself, similar to Brooke’s situation. Forest is also trying to find himself throughout the movie. Going from fighting in Vietnam, fishing for shrimp, or running across America Forest is constantly trying to find himself.
There are many similar features between Forest and Brooke, but there are also some differences. Brooke is a shy young girl, always doing what she’s told, terrified of her father. Adian is the one who finally breaks her shell and convinces her to stand up to her father and get custody of her brothers. Forest on the other hand has an ongoing mind of his own. It is shown from the very beginning of the movie that Forest is a very slow thinker, but overall Forest does things that not many people would do. Yes it’s true that Jenny somewhat breaks Forest’s shell, but overall Forest is already shown to be a confident independent human being.